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6/3/2002 5:51:01 PM
My Dad was: Strong, silent and serious. He was funny, witty, and charming. He was wise, intelligent, and smart. He was strict, unbending, yet flexible. He was dedicated, driven, and successful. He was loving, loyal, and wacky. He was a loving husband, father, brother, son, and friend. He was respected, honored, and fiercely protective of his family and country. He reputation rang through the hallowed halls of the US Army Medical Corps. He was fair, honest, and straightforward. He was brought low before his time by a thin wall in his aorta. When the news spread of his untimely demise, visitors came from far and wide, yes, even from DC. He touched so many with the qualities I have listed, and all types of people were present to grieve at the passing of a truly good man. He had a good life. He worked hard, strove to be the best, and he was. It's funny, one of the things I remember most about him now is this insane little giggle he had when he was pulling a prank on us. He overcame adversity. He survived Vietnam, and the aftermath. He will always be my hero: MSG(R) Wayne B. Smith.

Beverly aka Poddytat

PS I know it's not really poetry, but it feels like it to me.
©2002-2009 *poddytat
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My father was and still is my hero.

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:iconjmanx:
This is really great. Sounds like you had a dad many people would envy. I'm sorry to read that he passed on. It's great to see someone appreciative of their fathers in today's world where so many dad's are portrayed as bad unfaithful abusive. Good poem.
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...a beautiful dedication. I hope to be my childrens hero... in time. :) (Smile)
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How is it not poetry? It is meaningful words with a flow that invoke an emotional response.

I envy you your dad, and I can only hope that my children feel a tenth of what you obviously feel for yours. I try.

A lovely dedication, and you have the touch with words.. :-) (Smile)
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it is great...

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:iconpoddytat:
Thank you very much. My Dad meant an awful lot to me. I appreciate your kind comments.

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I purr therefore I am
:icond120l-t120l:
wow that's everything my dad isn't and he's still alive though i bet he dies soon of clogged arteries.

shame we can't all have/had dads like yours...

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my other "half" *half-pint
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Thank you for your kind words. Yeah, my Dad was pretty special. He had his quirks, but he was great. I hope you find some things about your dad to feel good about. You made my whole day! :)

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lol nope sorry... he eats too much and collects guns... that about sums it up, oh yeah and he racist and sexist...

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my other "half" *half-pint
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Whoops! Sorry about that. Maybe you'll get lucky and an anvil will fall on him (only if he has a ton of life insurance and you're the benificiary... :rofl:

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wow this poem really touched me!! i think ur dad sounds just so fine it is a great pity that he passed away...but what's great bout it is how u have held on to him...for memories are forever priceless :) :hug:

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